As Children We Run Through Castles
First Wrizzit post. I live a quiet existence and enjoy writing about life slowing down but quickening towards the end.
Mar 1, 2026 · 1 min read
As Children We Run Through Castles
You vessel a dune of sand,
it threads through your webbing
You clench a gnawing fist around the last grain
its spent sisters wait on the hourglass floor
Wind barrels harder during your final season
you push against it on the shore
You exhaust,
and notice how good air feels
rushing over an empty palm
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Comments (3)
Chris GreyMar 2, 2026
Didn't get a chance to comment earlier, but I love this. Feels cryptic....[[|:-)
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Dustin F (Between the Words)Mar 2, 2026
Nice little poem here. I like it. It reminds me of the innocence of childhood, and discovering new things. Keep writing!
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